HAYAKAWA, Haladana (Genin)

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Haladana Hayakawa

NAME: Haladana Hayakawa

ALIAS: Dana

GENDER: Female

BIRTH DATE: July 10th

AGE: 11

HEIGHT: 4'4

WEIGHT: 90 lbs

OTHER: N/a

SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Bisexual

NINJA RANK: Genin

OCCUPATION: spying

VILLAGE / AFFILIATION: Konohagakure

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HISTORY:

The Bingo book says their name is Barbie . I have been fighting for 25 years and taking
part on missions for one year.

How did you find My Pride is a Hurricane?: Emiko invited me to the site

Read more: naruto-mypride.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=app&action=display&thread=64#ixzz1yegdkaCJ

[TAKARA]

To be accepted the following needs to be fixed:

• Her occupation would be student.
  
• As a Genin, your character wouldn't be able to know all of the Raiton on your jutsu list, especially since you say that chakra control is hard for her. The typical Genin knows one or two jutsu other than the Academy techniques.
  
• In your history, you say that she took the graduation exam at age nine, then graduated at thirteen, and your character is only eleven.

[barbiedoll16]

I have fixed my paragraph.

[TAKARA]

A C C E P T E D .