NADARA, Tobu (ANBU)

[tobunadara]

Tobu Nanami Nadara

NAME: Tobu Nanami Nadara

ALIAS: Tobu

GENDER: Female

BIRTH DATE: January 15

AGE: 22

HEIGHT: 5 feet 4 inches

WEIGHT: 135Lbs

OTHER: Tobu has a pet hawk she calls Yuki that likes to fly around with her

SEXUAL ORIENTATION:Heterosexual

NINJA RANK: Anbu/Hunter Nin

OCCUPATION: Tobu was chosen to work in the Anbu Black Ops. She does a lot of the tracking but is also trained in medical healing. So she helps with the injured on the tracking missions and other such things.

VILLAGE / AFFILIATION: KONOHAGAKURE

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HISTORY:

The Bingo book says their name is Iggy. I have been fighting for 14 years and taking part on missions for 3 years.

How did you find My Pride is a Hurricane?: I checked out the Ad thread on a different site and found this

[TAKARA]

Hm I would say a bit more detail needs to be put into the history. You could put in more about her time at the Academy and as a Genin; more info. on how she became a Chuunin and then Jounin, etc.

[tobunadara]

All right can do ^^

[UZUMAKI NARUTO]

Right so everything in the app but the history is fine. Like Takara said it's too short and doesnt mention much of anything other than key points like becoming a genin and a chunin. You need to go into further detail explaining how she became an orphan fully like who were her birth parents and what happened to them. how did she get amnesia and wind up in village. need to explain more on her academy days and how she became a Chunin after becoming a Genin. Finally you need to also explain in greater detail how she got noticed by the Hokage and how she joined Anbu.

[tobunadara]

Sorry I had it all typed up then I didn't save it like I though I did. But anyways I finished it.

[TAKARA]

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