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Post by hawksbee sora on Mar 14, 2013 17:59:44 GMT -5
-CHARACTER APPLICATION FORM- [atrb=cellpadding,0,true][atrb=cellspacing,3,true][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=valign, top][atrb=style, color: f9f9f9;] APPLICATION STATUS: PENDING Credit goes to Rocky for the format ! THIS IS AN UNORIGINAL TEMPLATE TAILORED FOR N:PR | [atrb=style, color: f9f9f9;] ( `THE STATS. ) -- ☆ ★ N A M E.: Akihito Sora Hawksbee ★ D. O. B.: April 28th ★ A G E: fifteen ★ G E N D E R: male ★ A L I A S: sora ★ R A N K I N G: genin ★ O R I E N T A T I O N: heterosexual ★ H E I G H T: five foot seven in. ★ W E I G H T : one hundred thirty ★ O T H E R: anything else you wanna add? ★ O C C U P A T I O N: just a student ★ V I L L A G E / A F F I L I A T I O N: Konoha ★ ( `WHO YOU ARE. ) ★ G E N E R A L: Akihito is a bit of a charmer with the ladies. He is completely mysterious and tends to keep information about himself as a secret. Aki tends to be a bit persistent when it comes to training others and himself. He thrives on being a perfectionist and any one around him who is training has to have it perfect. One side of him is the fact he is a narcissist. He tends to be full of himself and hates to admit that he's wrong. In time he will find a way to actually say it but usually is left with feeling dumb. Typical Akihito behavior is to act sweet and innocent around people to get information. It usually works on women of all people as he knows he can have them in his hands. Though he has the narcissist attitude there are times where he is very nice to people. He does know that friendship is a key to everything, even if it is to keep that friend ship alive with doing something he doesn't want to. ★ L I K E S: ♥ Adventure ♥ Meditation ♥ being along ♥ weapons ♥ Girls ★ D I S L I K E S:✗ Evil ✗ Large crowds ✗ Chaos ✗ Not getting any work done ★ S T R E N G T H S: ♥ Sword Techniques ♥ gathering information ♥ fighting ♥ Causing a bit of trouble ★ W E A K N E S S E S:✗ Personality ✗ Flirting with danger ✗ Being at a genin level and attempting to accomplish so much more.
★ A M B I T I O N:✔ Moving on to the next level and beyond ✔ Joining intel and becoming commander someday ✔ Enjoying life. ( `ACE IN THE HOLE. ) -- ☆ ★ W E A P O N S:Kunai knives, throwing stars, and one sword(rare in use at this point in time)Name of Weapon here IMAGE: if you have an image of the pic, use the code to link it and NOT . SIZE: WEIGHT: DESCRIPTION: EFFECT: any special effects? Leave blank if not. SIDE EFFECT(S): ★ C H A K R A . N A T U R E (S): wind ★ J U T S U: keep in mind of the regulations for ninja rank and limited amount of jutsu [ H E R E ]. Also, don't forget your beginner E-rank jutsus [ H E R E ]. Use the template below for all your techniques; even Kekkei Genkai: both original and custom. Name of Technique Wind Release Great Breakthrough CUSTOM/ORIGINAL: Original TYPE: Ninjitsu NATURE: Wind RANK: C CHAKRA COST: about a quarter of chakra RANGE: Short to mid range DESCRIPTION: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame. SIDE EFFECTS: For a genin level ninja can use a lot of chakra. Possible side effect can be leaving the user unprotected from another attack as well as the wind failing. Supplimentary Skills
(IF you want to have a Summon, use this template whether custom or original make this jutsu the last one in your list. It is not mandatory to have a Summon.)Summoning Technique ~ Name of Summon TYPE: Blood Contract? or other type? CONTRACT SIGNER: name of people who has contract with this Summon. SUMMON: what kind of Summon is it? CHAKRA COST: Can't be minimal for sure...so Moderate? Extensive? ABILITIES: The Summoning's techniques (if they have any) should be listed using the Technique format above
★ ( `BLOOD IS THICKER. ) ★ Is this applicable?: NO.★ CLAN: n/a ★ SIZE: n/a ★ LOCATION: n/a ★ HISTORY: in/a. ★ NINDO: n/a ★ TECHNIQUES: any special techniques or kekkei genkai. USE THE TECHNIQUES TEMPLATE ABOVE: EVEN FOR KEKKEI GENKAI. ( `HISTORY LESSON. ) -- ☆ ★ P A R E N T S:Nina Hawksbee-mother stay at home mom. Si Hawksbee-ANBU assassin best dad there is. ★ S I B L I N G S:Lilly Hawksbee-twin sister genin tends to get into trouble Isabelle Hawksbee- Older sister, Intel agent. Nova Hawksbee- Older sister, tracker ninja Leea Hawksbee- younger sister, genin. ★ L O V E R:n/a ★ C H I L D R E N:n/a ★ H I S T O R Y: One crazy small at first family was given much luck to have been blessed with two more children on April 28th fifteen years ago, Akihito Sora and his twin sister Lilly Beth were born. At first the family of Hawksbee had two girls already ages 3 and 5 years old. That's to say those two weren't enough Sora as he loved to be called would bring a bit of a problem. About a year after the twins were born, the family added their fifth and final child named Leea. Of course that wasnt to say being so close in age to Sora and Lily didn't make any less wild than those two. Apart of growing up with four sisters was he had to learn on his own what it meant to stand out. By five years old the young male had everyone interested in what he could do, although by nature he was quiet and reserved it didn't stop him from the ability to show off some of his skills in acrobatics. Sora was very flexible when it came down to his movement and his father seen that him and his sister Lily had ninja ability like their sisters and him. The mother of the family knew that it meant two more kids she'd have to worry about. Although they still had a bit of time before they would be in the academy. It was the fact that the only male child of a family of seven figured out real quick what to do. With every trying time he managed to cause trouble but yet stay out of trouble. It was at first his family belonged to suna but found that in life things had to change so they moved from the desert to Konoh. Sora started to learn a few ninja techniques, only the basics that was meant for surviving. The felt that moving would bring them a bit of safe keeping.
Sora grew to the age of being able to go to the ninja academy with his twin sister. First thing though was the two caused a lot of problem for their father. They two managed to destroy two of the rooms of their home. At first the two disappeared for a bit knowing they were in a lot of trouble; but when they found themselves in more trouble as they watched someone kill a few ninjas. Naturally they ran back not know who that was or what he was going to do to them. Upon their first year in the ninja academy both of the kids would learn fast and quick the basic ninja skills to survive. Only a short year after were they joined by their young sister Leea. As if the shinobi didn't have enough problem keeping the twins in check but they added another child who was probably worse. It was during the year one war that Sora was starting his genin year that he found out being a ninja was cooler than what it looked. At first they kept him and Lily Beth on the same team. Soon after they wanted to separate the two because of the fighting that was going on. Of course he would take on some interesting missions in his few short years of being a ninja. His confidence was a little crazy for the girls. ★ OUT OF CHARACTER ★ F A C E - C L A I M:You need to post in [ H E R E ] to claim your anime character. Your application will NOT not be accepted if you don't post in that thread. ★ W H O-P L A Y S-W H O:You need to post in [ H E R E ] to update the characters you have. Your application will NOT not be accepted if you don't post in that thread. The Bingo book says their name is ARTEMIS. I have been fighting for TWENTY-THREE years and taking part on missions for SEVENISH years.
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Post by FUUKAME YUKITO on Mar 15, 2013 1:38:17 GMT -5
Another ladies' man lol; looking good so far, but here's a few things you should fix up:
JUTSU;;
What's the name of the technique? Also, I don't get the Side Effect. If anything, you should add in Chakra usage which is always a side effect, but clarify what you have there now for me.
HISTORY;;
Somewhere down the line, you said that Sora and his twin were joined by their younger sister Leea, but from the top, you said that Sora and his twin are the younger children born to a family with 2 girls already. You didn't mention another girl being born. Please clarify if I'm mistaken.
And smaller minute stuff like just look over for proper spelling and stuff; like from the beginning Heterosexual and Konoha etc. That's it from my view. Good luck!
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Post by hawksbee sora on Mar 15, 2013 12:29:37 GMT -5
Is on my phone -hoping this worked- but i did update a bit please let me know if something needs to be changed haha cause well my phone hates me
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Post by UCHIHA SASUKE on Mar 16, 2013 20:06:35 GMT -5
Approved
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