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Post by YOSHIDA AKASHA on Nov 16, 2012 16:41:13 GMT -5
Akasha Shin Yoshida NAME: Akasha Shin Yoshida
ALIAS: Master of Ten-Thousand Jutsu (Self-Proclaimed.).
GENDER: Male
BIRTHDATE: August 12th
AGE: 22
HEIGHT: 5'8"
WEIGHT: 155 pounds
OTHER: TEXT (optional)
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Heterosexual
NINJA RANK: Chuunin
OCCUPATION: Tracking, Investigation, Fighter.
VILLAGE / AFFILIATION: Iwagakure
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[/i] SIZE: Small WEIGHT: 6 pounds/light DESCRIPTION: A fairly large grappling hook, designed to be able to dig it’s blades into wood or other easily pierced materials. EFFECT: It can be used offensively to slash at, and grab/pull at a target. SIDE EFFECT: Due to it’s size and nature, the grappling hook isn’t very likely to harm any ninja worth their salt, though it’s main application is largely either for motion to to supplement another technique.[/ul] FIGHTING STYLE:CHAKRA NATURE:TECHNIQUES: [/blockquote]
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The Bingo book says their name is Masterblarg. I have been fighting for 20 years and taking part on missions for 6 years. How did you find My Pride is a Hurricane?: Searching through Proboards!
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Post by YOSHIDA AKASHA on Nov 16, 2012 16:43:06 GMT -5
Slingshot Grapple Technique Type: Taijutsu Rank: D Range: - Chakra Cost: Low RP Description: Using some kind of stretchy rope, usually some kind of bungee cord, the user can quickly slingshot their self around an area, as well as quickly bind a target to set them up for another attack. Weakness: Even a user well versed in this technique can’t avoid the vulnerability which comes when attaching the grappling rope to a surface, as for a short period of time an enemy has full access to the rope, as well as the user.
Lightning Entry TYPE: Taijutsu Rank: C Range: Moderate (0-15 feet) RP Description: Akasha will throw his grappling hook beyond his target, allowing it to catch on tightly to whatever it can. Then, he will quickly pull back to increase the tension on the cord, before leaping forward and performing a kick at a much higher velocity than the basic Dynamic Entry, as well as has a longer range. Weakness: While far more powerful than it’s progenitor, the setup for the attack must be either done unnoticed or extremely quickly, as once the hook is thrown, the user is vulnerable until beginning the attack.
Reveal the Past Sin’s Type: Ninjutsu/Genjutsu (Not entirely sure which) Rank: B Range: Touching Chakra Cost: Varies RP Description: The only jutsu Akasha can actually credit himself in creating, it allows the user to experience past events by touching an object. While the technique doesn’t give clear visions as to what exactly happened, clues can be retrieved through careful meditation. Weakness: The jutsu doesn’t give any sort of clear vision, more like small hints of sight, sound, scent, etc. Also, the further back in time the user wishes to ‘see’, the more chakra must be expended. Similarly, the more detail the user wishes to gain, the more chakra must be expended.
Grapple Driver Type: Taijutsu Rank: B Range: Close Chakra: None RP Description: After attaching their grappling hook to the target, the user will launch them into the air, using the tension of the rope to continually knock the target higher, as well as pull themselves further into the air. Upon reaching the desired altitude, the user will grab the target by the legs, aim them so they fall head first, and then place their feet on the target’s arms to fully immobilize them. When performed correctly, the target will hit the ground head first, taking both the damage of impact, as well as the force of the user’s weight on top of them.
Weakness: The technique requires the user’s grappling hook be binding the target, and must be executed perfectly in order to have the desired result, as well as keep the user from getting hurt as well.
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Post by FUUKAME YUKITO on Nov 18, 2012 10:01:13 GMT -5
Welcome to MPIAH and congrats on creating your first character!
I'll be taking a look at your app.
Most of it seems fine to me, but I'd just like to point out these notes so when an admin sees, you can be instantly approved!
- In your History, you mentioned that your character learned his self-taught Jutsu as a Genin before the Chuunin Exams, at least thats the impression I get from the wording. Seeing as it's a B-Ranked Jutsu, it's not realistic that he successfully developed the technique by then. So, please fix that - he would have to have mastered it after he reached Chuunin.
- All Techniques require some sort of Side Effect or Weakness, so all those that are missing that, please fill in.
That's it for me; good luck!!
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Post by YOSHIDA AKASHA on Nov 18, 2012 11:09:44 GMT -5
Alrighty, all fixed, thanks!
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Post by FUUKAME YUKITO on Nov 18, 2012 23:53:51 GMT -5
An admin will change your profile, but you're free to start RPing!
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