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Post by Darui on Feb 18, 2013 1:00:28 GMT -5
TERUMI CHOROU NAME: Terumi Chorou
ALIAS: The Blaze of Kirigakure
GENDER: Male
BIRTHDATE: August 2nd
AGE: 29
HEIGHT: 6'1
WEIGHT: 189
OTHER: Two scars run along his face while his body is littered with them.
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: (Heterosexual
NINJA RANK: ANBU/INTEL
OCCUPATION: Intel Member along with Head ANBU
VILLAGE / AFFILIATION: Kirigakure
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The Bingo book says their name is Brandon. I have been fighting for 21 years and taking part on missions for years years.
How did you find My Pride is a Hurricane?: TEXT Member of Staff
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Post by UZUMAKI NARUTO on Feb 18, 2013 13:09:26 GMT -5
Right Changes
1] Lava and Boil are releases not chakra natures and both are broken down to Fire and Water.
2] Personality and History need to be expanded more they are rather short.
3] Techniques need ranking and descriptions.
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Post by UZUMAKI NARUTO on Feb 18, 2013 22:16:12 GMT -5
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